English 270
GRADUATE
POETRY
WORKSHOP

as three ring circus

Wednesdays, 4-6:30 pm

Juliana Spahr
Mills Hall 315
510-430-2289

office hours
Tuesdays, 2-3
Wednesdays, 2-2:30

 

 

 

 

The parameters . . .
The format for this workshop is a little more complicated than usual. If this is too hard to understand, don't panic. We will go over this in class.

* (first ring)
The first three weeks (September 1, 8, and 15), we will hear from four poets per session. If you are one of the presenting poets for the week, you should bring in 13 copies of a piece of writing that is around 2-5 pages. If not, just come to class with paper and writing instrument.

* (second ring)
September 22, October 13, and November 3 are group work days. We will break up into groups of three. Each group will have a different focus. You will lead a group one time during the semester. As leader, you should prepare an activity that is one hour and forty five minutes long and you should run by me what you plan to do at least a week in advance (you can email me or you can stop by my office hours). The last half hour of these workshops we will meet as a whole for summation/discussion.

If you are nervous or can't think of what to do for your session, please contact me and I will help you to design it. When planning, try and think about what might most benefit you and your peers and be fun. These are meant to be casual and a chance to do something within the workshop that you usually don't get to do. So use them to add your own interests to the workshop.

Groups are loosely guided by these topics:

performance
[discussion of performance poetry or in workshop writing of a performance poem; or in workshop performance of a poem; or . . . ]

in workshop writing/creation
[For some ideas see Charles Bernstein's and Bernadette Mayer's lists of experiments.

Also, these books are on reserve for more ideas . . .

Lewis Turco, The New Book of Forms
808.1 T933b 2000

Oulipo: A Primer of Potential Literature, ed Warren F. Motte, Jr.
840.6044 O934 1998

edited by Jerome Rothenberg and Pierre Joris, Poems for the millennium: the University of California book of modern & postmodern poetry
808.81 P744

ed. Alex Preminger, The Princeton handbook of poetic terms
808.1 P957 1986 ]

reading/discussion of other poet's ideas
[Leader will assign an article off the reserve list to discuss or respond to or write an imitation of or . . . If you don't want to do any of the articles on reserve, come talk to me. I will need to add anything you want to do to reserve, so please get it to me at least three weeks in advance. Also recognize that if you are leading this workshop, you should give your participants enough lead time to do the reading so you might have to some advance planning.]

alternative workshop
[Could be as simple as just a time for more detailed work in a smaller group or could be something more experimental.]

* (third ring)
During the remaining weeks, we will discuss the work of two poets per workshop. If your work is being discussed, you should bring to class thirteen copies of a good chunk of work (10-20 pages) the week before.

Here is how this will work…

Each Poet will have two readers, Reader A and Reader B. Readers A and B will each write up a page response to the work and bring 13 copies for the class.

Reader As will describe the work formally. They will notice at least six to ten things about the work. They might notice tense and they might notice form and they might notice structure. They might also notice content but the emphasis should be on how this intersects with form (in other words, Reader A would not summarize what the Poet might be saying except how content intersects with form). They might list what sorts of things are in the work and what sorts of things are not in the work. They might talk about the value systems of the form (such as the Poet values clarity and clearly sorted data thus they embed their narrative in the sonnet form or the Poet values chaos and disorder thus they tear apart the sonnet form). Any sort of formal analysis. At moments Reader A might feel s/he is being too simple but s/he should not worry about this because his/her observations might be transparent to the Poet. Reader As might imagine themselves as Russian formalist critics of the 50s. Those with ambition and interest might refer to work by Roman Jakobson for some insane suggestions here. Reader As will not say things like I like this (or not) in this piece of writing (although they may well want to say this in the workshop and should).

Reader Bs will describe the stakes of the work. They will address why the work matters (and they will assume that it does matter). They might place the work in a tradition and discuss how it differs from or agrees with that tradition. They might hypothesize about influences. They might provide context for the piece. They might recommend reading to the Poet. They, like the Reader As, will avoid evaluative critique. Reader Bs might find it helpful to think of themselves as writing a poetic statement for the Poet.

Poets should submit work that will benefit from this sort of analysis. And they should come to class with some notes that answer these questions also. Poets might want to think of these questions as a gentle sort of pressure on the writing hand and not as anything else. If a Poet finds that these questions make their mind spin and disable the writing hand, then Poet should forget them. They are not worth any anxiety that leads to the avoidance of writing (on the contrary, they should produce more writing). Maybe the Poet will find that someone else in workshop might be able to answer them anyway.


* in addition . . .
This class will have a discussion blog. You are highly encouraged to post at least four times on the blog.

1. A post where you introduce yourself, your interest in poetics, your influences, concerns, questions by September 6. Maybe list six favorite books. Maybe post a poem that matters to you and do a reading of it. Maybe just babble about yourself.
2. A post on the work of Charles Bernstein by November 9.
3. A post on the work of Jennifer Moxley by November 30.
4. A post on what you did in the group session you lead and if it worked or not within a week after your session.

I'm going to be flexible about other posts on the blog but also realize that I'm very pro posts to the blog. More regular posts are encouraged, but not required. Please announce your readings or readings that you plan to go to. Please discuss any readings that you went to and what they were like. Discuss any books you've read recently. Any other ideas about poetry. Post poetic manifestos, complaints, diatribes. Etc.

Even if you only post four times, please read the blog at least once a week.

How the blog works…
http://english270.blogspot.com

You give me your email and then the blog company will send you an email about how to log in.

You will need to create a new account (unless you've already got a blog). After you do this you will be taken to a main page. On the right side there will be a list of "your" blogs. It should say English 270 in that list. Click there. It should be self explanatory from there.

The blog is public and can be viewed by anyone but only people in the class can contribute.

* books . . .
These books are available at the Mills College bookstore and should be on reserve in the library. . .

Jennifer Moxley, The Sense Record
Salt Publishing; 1876857935

Jennifer Moxley, Imagination Verses
Salt Publishing; 1876857943

Charles Bernstein, With Strings
U of Chicago: 0226044602

Charles Bernstein, My Way
U of Chicago; 0226044106

* reserves . . .
I am working on assembling a collection of poetics essays that will remain on reserve semester after semester. I welcome suggestions for this resource.

Right now the following are all available via e-reserves:

Adorno, Theodor W. "Commitment"
Anzaldua, Gloria. "How to Tame a Wild Tongue"
Brathwaite, Kamau. "History of the Voice: The Development of Nation Language in Anglophone Caribbean Poetry"
Breton, Andre and Diego Rivera (and Trotsky). "Manifesto for an Independent Revolutionary Art"
Cortazar, Julio "The Writer and His Task in Latin America"
Dalton, Rogue. "Poetry and Militancy in Latin America"
Evans, Steve. "Field Notes: October 2003-June 2004"
Hejinian, Lyn. "The Rejection of Closure"
Howe, Susan. "Encloser"
Kawaharada, Dennis. "Local Mythologies: 1979-2000"
Padgett, Ron. "Creative Reading Techniques"
Mayakovsky, Vladimir. "How Are Verses Made"
Mullen, Harryette. "Imagining the Unimagined Reader: Writing to the Unborn and Including the Excluded"
Glissant, Edouard. "The unforseable diversity of the world."
Stein, Gertrude. "Poetry and Grammar"
Waldrop, Rosmarie. "Alarms and Excursions"
Watten, Barrett. "Bride of the Assembly Line: from Material Text to Cultural Poetics"

 

To access . . .

go to http://minerva.mills.edu
choose "reserves by faculty"
enter spahr in the box
choose english270
the password is ENG270-01F04